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Hi there! I'm pretty new to the Smallville fandom and I'd really like someone to look over the new fic I've started. It's a Chruce future-fic (think post-Superman Returns), and I have the first 6 chapters already finished. I'm holding off on posting until I've gotten a second opinion, so any help would be seriously appreciated. Thanks!